My contribution to Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers…
(NOTE: this is an abbreviated version of my story for the letter T for the 2019 A to Z Challenge)
She thrust the tea cup into my hands. “Don’t drink all. Leave some.”
I did as I was told, setting it down on the table between us when there was a little left.
“Hold in left hand. Swirl three times. To the right.”
I swirled the contents, mesmerized by the agitated leaves. I held the cup towards her but she shook her head. “Upside down on saucer. Slowly.”
Next she lifted the cup, peering inside. “GO!”
“What?”
“Now!”
Still arguing, she pushed me out the door. What had she seen that so terrified-
My thoughts were cut short by the bullet that killed me.
Thank you.
That’s a sudden affirmation in the what the tea leaves said! 😉
I suspect she didn’t want the death to happen inside her shop. LOL!
That certainly is a sudden ending!
Thanks for stopping by and taking time to read & comment. Hope you’ll follow along!
Tea reading, I love that. One can’t escape fate.
Thank you – it just seemed to fit. LOL!
An effective ghostly narrative. Well done.
Glad you enjoyed it, Sandra.
She literally pushed him to his end.
She did, but it was fated. Right? 😉
That’s right 🙂
Wow! Great take!
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. How do you like the new format?
Very good, though I’m not on any social media other than WP (my choice) so can’t comment on links etc.
Seems I’ve finally got my froggy gremlins sorted though. Two weeks ago I couldn’t link in, and last week I couldn’t read anything!
Have a great weekend.
It’s never ending at times…..LOL!
Hey remind me from now on not to drink my tea quite so obediently
[snicker] Thanks, Larry!
If she hadn’t pushed her out the door, would she have been hit by the bullet? Did she make it happen by reading that it would happen… I have a headache now 🙂 Nice one!
We will never know, will we…LOL!
When did tea become so hazardous? I’m going to have to rethink my tea habit. (Thinking…) Nope, unbreakable.
I know…LOL! Thanks for stopping by to read & comment. Much appreciated!
Wow! Fast-paced (ill) fortune with an ending unexpected by the character AND me.
Thanks…glad you enjoyed it.
prophecy fulfilled. what a twist of fate.
Thanks…it was a fun write!
Both your MC and I weren’t expecting what happened.
I wasn’t expecting it when I wrote it!
🙂
Nice one. Didn’t see that coming at the end.